YOU SAID:
Betty bought a bit of butter but the butte betty bought was a bit bitter so she bought some more butter to make the bitter butter better
INTO JAPANESE
ベティはバターを少し買ったが、買ったバターは少し苦かったので、バターをもっと良くするためにバターをもう少し買った
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Betty bought a little butter, but the butter she bought was a bit bitter, so she bought a little more butter to make it better.
INTO JAPANESE
ベティは少しバターを買いましたが、彼女が買ったバターは少し苦かったので、彼女はそれを良くするためにもう少しバターを買いました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Betty bought a little butter, but the butter she bought was a bit bitter, so she bought a little more butter to make it better.
Come on, you can do better than that.