YOU SAID:
Bedtime? Lauren asked with a raised eyebrow as Serena grabbed her purse.
INTO JAPANESE
就寝時間?セレナが財布を掴むと、ローレンは眉を上げて尋ねた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Bedtime? When Serena grabbed her purse, Lauren raised her eyebrows and asked.
INTO JAPANESE
就寝時間?セレナが財布を掴んだとき、ローレンは眉を上げて尋ねた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Bedtime? When Serena grabbed her purse, Lauren raised her eyebrows and asked.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.