YOU SAID:
as she watched the sunset, she noticed the tiny dot of blackness sink away, along with everyone's memory of it existing
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は夕日を見て、黒の小さな点が沈んでいることに気付きました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She saw the setting sun and noticed that a small dot of black was sinking
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は夕日を見て、小さな黒い点が沈んでいることに気づいた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She saw the setting sun and noticed that a small black spot was sinking
INTO JAPANESE
彼女は夕日を見て、小さな黒い斑点が沈んでいることに気づいた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
She saw the setting sun and noticed that a small black spot was sinking
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