YOU SAID:
As she awakens, ravens start singing
INTO JAPANESE
彼女が目覚め、レイヴンズの開始歌
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Her awakening, the Ravens started singing
INTO JAPANESE
彼女の目覚め、レイブンズは歌いを始めた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Her awakening, the Ravens began to sing
INTO JAPANESE
彼女の目覚め、レイブンズは歌い始めた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Her awakening, the Ravens began to sing
That didn't even make that much sense in English.