YOU SAID:
As one of the largest countries in the world, the United States is a powerhouse of the global economy. Despite this, many of its citizens are ignorant of proper financing techniques. Without this information, it is no wonder that more than 45 million civilians live in poverty. However, many schools have already found a solution to this. Schools have implemented mandatory finance classes nation-wide in order to prevent the ignorance that is found in the United States. Not only is it a rational decision for the School Board to implement a mandatory finance class, but essential, as students are in dire need of assistance, these classes have been proven effective, and the parents are incapable of teaching their children themselves.
INTO JAPANESE
世界最大の国のひとつとして、アメリカ合衆国は、世界経済の原動力です。それにもかかわらず、市民の多くは適切な資金調達技術の無知であります。この情報がなければそれは以上 4500 万の市民が貧困に住んでいることも不思議ではありません。しかし、多くの学校は既にこの解決策を発見しました。学校は海
That didn't even make that much sense in English.