YOU SAID:

As he entered the church he could hear the soft voice of someone whispering into a cell phone.

INTO JAPANESE

彼が教会に入ると、誰かが携帯電話にささやくような柔らかい声が聞こえました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

As he entered the church, he heard someone whispering in his cell phone.

INTO JAPANESE

彼が教会に入ると、彼は誰かが彼の携帯電話でささやくのを聞いた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

As he entered the church, he heard someone whisper on his cell phone.

INTO JAPANESE

彼が教会に入ると、彼は誰かが彼の携帯電話でささやくのを聞いた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

As he entered the church, he heard someone whisper on his cell phone.