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As he came into the window It was the sound of a crescendo He came into her apartment

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彼が窓に入ったときそれはクレッシェンドの音だった彼は彼女のアパートに入った

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It was the sound of a crescendo when he entered the window He entered her apartment

INTO JAPANESE

彼が窓に入ったとき、それはクレッシェンドの音でした彼は彼女のアパートに入りました

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When he entered the window, it was the sound of crescendo He entered her apartment

INTO JAPANESE

彼が窓に入ったとき、それはクレッシェンドの音でした彼は彼女のアパートに入りました

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When he entered the window, it was the sound of crescendo He entered her apartment