YOU SAID:
And when i saw her, she took my breath away, she had grown into herself and now stood tall and confident
INTO JAPANESE
そして私が彼女を見たとき、彼女は私の息を引き取った、彼女は自分自身に成長し、今では背が高く自信を持って立っていた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
And when I looked at her, she died of my breath, she grew up on herself and now stood tall and confident
INTO JAPANESE
そして、私が彼女を見たとき、彼女は私の息で死にました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
And when I saw her, she died in my breath.
INTO JAPANESE
そして、私が彼女を見たとき、彼女は私の息で死にました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
And when I saw her, she died in my breath.
Come on, you can do better than that.