YOU SAID:
and so it was later when the miller told his tale that her face at first just ghostly turned a whiter shade of pale
INTO JAPANESE
後ミラーが彼に言ったときだったので、物語の最初に彼女の顔がペールのホワイター シェードを幽霊みたいになって、
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Later when Miller said he was at the beginning of the story in her face a whiter shade of pale ghosts like,
That didn't even make that much sense in English.