YOU SAID:
Also, if you have a sentence that you love from a particular author, and you think it’s a better sentence than the one I’ve quoted, please, by all means, let’s have the sentences do battle! Post it and we’ll see whether it’s better.
INTO JAPANESE
また、ある作者の好きな文章があって、私が引用した文章よりも良い文章だと思うものがあれば、ぜひその文章でバトルをしてみましょう!それを投稿して、それがより良いかどうかを確認します。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Also, if there is a sentence by an author that you like, and if there is a sentence that you think is better than the sentence I quoted, let's have a battle with that sentence! Post it and see if it's better.
INTO JAPANESE
また、好きな作者の文章があり、引用した文章よりも良いと思う文章があれば、その文章でバトルしましょう!投稿して、改善されているかどうかを確認してください。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Also, if there is a sentence by an author you like and you think it is better than the quoted sentence, let's battle with that sentence! Please post it and see if it's improved.
INTO JAPANESE
また、引用した文章よりも自分の好きな作者の文章の方が良いと思う文章があれば、その文章で勝負しましょう!投稿して改善されるかどうかを確認してください。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Also, if there is a sentence that you think is better written by your favorite author than the quoted sentence, let's compete with that sentence! Please post it and see if it improves.
INTO JAPANESE
また、引用した文章よりも好きな作家の方が書いた方が良いと思う文章があれば、その文章で勝負してみましょう!投稿して改善されるかどうかを確認してください。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Also, if there is a sentence that you think is better written by your favorite author than the quoted sentence, let's compete with that sentence! Please post it and see if it improves.
Well done, yes, well done!