YOU SAID:
Alice realizes her drawing is getting sloppy, so she focuses on refining her technique and gets better.
INTO JAPANESE
アリスは自分の絵が雑になっていることに気づき、技術を磨くことに集中して上達します。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Alice notices that her drawings are becoming sloppy and concentrates on honing her skills to improve.
INTO JAPANESE
アリスは自分の絵が雑になっていることに気づき、上達するためにスキルを磨くことに集中します。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Alice notices that her drawings are becoming sloppy and focuses on honing her skills to improve.
INTO JAPANESE
アリスは自分の絵が雑になっていることに気づき、上達するためにスキルを磨くことに集中します。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Alice notices that her drawings are becoming sloppy and focuses on honing her skills to improve.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.