YOU SAID:

After the red October comes the November rain.

INTO JAPANESE

赤い10月が11月の雨になると。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When the red October comes rain in November.

INTO JAPANESE

赤い10月は11月に雨が降る。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

It is raining in November in the red October.

INTO JAPANESE

赤い10月には11月に雨が降っています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

It is raining in November in the red October.