YOU SAID:
A ray of sunshine makes its way through the clouds and punishes my eyes causing me to squint.
INTO JAPANESE
太陽の光が雲の間から差し込み、私の目を痛めて目を細めます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sun's rays pierce through the clouds, making my eyes hurt and squint.
INTO JAPANESE
太陽の光が雲を突き抜けて、目が痛くなり目を細めます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sun's rays pierce through the clouds, making your eyes hurt and squint.
INTO JAPANESE
太陽の光が雲を突き抜けて、目が痛くなり目を細めます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sun's rays pierce through the clouds, making your eyes hurt and squint.
Come on, you can do better than that.