YOU SAID:
A broken voice, and his whole function suiting with forms to his conceit?
INTO JAPANESE
壊れた声と彼の全体の機能をまざまざと合せ?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Broken voice and his whole function suiting it clearly?
INTO JAPANESE
壊れた声と明らかにそれに適する彼の全体の機能ですか。
You should move to Japan!